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A bouquet of marigolds to heal your cracked rib bones,
You hold your head so high.
So high. So High.

A cigarette and a swig of rum,
You hold that bottle so high.
So high. So high.

A line of cocaine and you smile at me,
Oh, and your were so high.
So high. So high.

To my bedroom from my window sill.
You climbed up here so high.
So high. So high.

A ring in my pocket.
Oh, yes, my hopes are so high.
So high. So high.
:iconashley-mccorkle:

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I wrote this in class the other day.
It started as a poem, and ended like this.

Should I keep working on it or give up?

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:iconmystic-paranoia:
That is really good. Keep working, I say!

-jess
:iconouija68:
great start keep going there is more to say I think.
~Ouija~

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