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Some Song Lyrics -rough draft- by ~ashley-mccorkle:iconashley-mccorkle:



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Verse One:
Oh It's / Seven o' clock and the alarm rings.
now just, hit the snooze button please.
baby you're not going to find those keys.
I hid them, Sonny, so come back to sleep.
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Verse Two:
Just forget that big, mean ol' boss of yours.
If you go, it'll start a war.
So, kick you're feet up, get them off the floor.
Oh, now, baby scooch over here a little more.
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Chorus:
Oh, Thank God for this body heat.
Without it, we'd surely freeze.
Oh my Lord, I think I feel a breeze.
Put the covers back on. Oh pretty please?
The taste of that last cigarette lingers,
And the touch of your chilly fingers
Are givin' me a bad case of the shivers.
So come back here, now, let's be lovers.
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Verse Three:
Well now, you don't have any lawn to mow.
And we ain't got no place to go.
The roads are all closed 'cuz of all the snow.
So please, baby, .... don't go.
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Author's Comments

I've been working on this song for a while, but then again, I haven't.

should i continue tweeking this song?
or should i give up on it?

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:icondurrtaco:
Continue! ^^ It sounds great so far :D
:iconwith-accusing-eyes:
it sounds good.
but it seems like a lot of songs sound like this.
it's still very good though, I think you should continue.
:icontralalalala7:
KEEP GOING!

how did you even think of this? i dont have nearly that amount of creativity

--
Kate: Where did that come from
Sawyer: probably bear village how the hell would i know
Kate: not the bear, the gun
Sawyer: swiped it of a US marshal, thought it would come in handy and guess what
I JUST SHOT A BEAR
:iconashley-mccorkle:
aahah. well, i would tell you, but then i'd have to kill you.

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"your mom goes to college."
:iconashley-mccorkle:
thankies

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"your mom goes to college."
:iconashley-mccorkle:
why, thank you.

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"your mom goes to college."
:icontralalalala7:
lol well tell me and then i'll just sleep with one eye open :D

--
Kate: Where did that come from
Sawyer: probably bear village how the hell would i know
Kate: not the bear, the gun
Sawyer: swiped it of a US marshal, thought it would come in handy and guess what
I JUST SHOT A BEAR

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